Friday, June 4, 2010

Attempted poem

I dreamt that I was in a dream
heavy lids and burdened arms

surrounded by darkness
dried tears on my face
I couldn't wake.

I dreamt that I was in a dream

feeling strange and so surreal

floating on clouds and rainbow dreams

smile on lips and fluttering lids

basking in light

I couldn't wake.


Three rings heard

My dreams interrupted

sadness lingers

but the light is brighter

and with a smile still present

my eyes fluttered open.


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Pardon my poor english...inspiration always hits when I'm supposed to be doing something else...hmph...

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Impressive. Sounds really poetic!

Mabel said...

thanks so much! :)